Help : translation correction-title and few words

[Robin.Q]

i have an article about iPad

the article is here
http://www.economist.com/node/17043882


i translate it to Arabic

i wish someone to correct it for me

please brothers

I just want u to concentrate at the title if its correct
and to check the bold words


I can't post it here
to puplic

because itz for school

I'll send it to anyone willing to help as private msg

so who will help me?

please!