منتديات لغاتى التعليمية - طلب تصحيح لترجمتي

أخواني لقد قمت بترجمة هذا النص من اللغه العربيه الى الانجليزيه واود منكم ان تصححوا الاخطاء فيها ولكم جزيل الشكر

The Islam Pillars
Islam based on five pillars which distinguished by Prophet Mohammad (PBUH) saying “ Islam made up of five pillars .testify that there is no god but Allah and Mohammad is Messenger of Allah, performing the prayers, alms-giving, fasting of the Ramadan month and pilgrimage to the holy house in Makah.”

Islam as creed and shariah , Allah and his messenger distinguished the forbidden (avoidances) and the Hallal ( permissions) , morals and manners, dealings, rights and obligations and scenes of judgment day. When Allah completed this religion by his prophet that to be considered to humanity life until the final day of life. As almightily Allah said “ this day I have perfected your religion for you , completed my favor upon you, and have chosen for you Islam as your religion .

Pillars and Rules of Islam.
The first pillar of Islam is the two testimonies :

Human must think that Allah is Alone that he is the owner ,the controller and the giver and he has the perfect names and high descriptions which he proofed them to him self or proofed by his messenger. He is the one who deserved to be worshiped with out any one or thing and as Almightily Allah said “he is the originator of the heavens and the earth . how can he has children when he has no wife?. He created all things and he is All-knower of every thing.* such is Allah your lord ! L’ailaha illa huwa (non has the right to be worshiped but he) the creator of all things, so worship him (alone) and he is the Wakil (trustee, disposer of affairs or guardian) over all things.

As the human also think that Allah sent his Messenger(Mohammad ) peace be upon him and descended the holy Quran and ordered him to inform this religion to all mankind. The love of Allah and His messenger and obeying them are obligation for every one. this love of god can not be perfected except following of messenger doings. As almightily Allah said “say ( Mohammad to mankind ) if you really love Allah ,then follow me (i.e. accept Islamic monotheism , follow the Quran And Suunah ) , Allah will love you and forgive you your sins .and Allah is oft-forgiving , most merciful .