"one day i went on a car tour with my family to the seaside. we were six people and had to make room for a seventh person, my aunt, in our small car! my father made arrangements for the whole family to stop fot two hours at every town on our way to the sea.
we tried to make the best of our tour and enjoy every minute of it. we also made use of our time, especially the children who did good things such as making paper into planes and ships. we made towards a large forest on the main road just off the seaside. my father made up his mind and decided to make his way through it. a short time later, we got off the car to have a barbecue lunch underneath a big tree on which birds had made their nests.
there we made friends with a nice family we met by chance for the first time. we all made ready to have lunch together. all children made themselves useful by collecting wood for fire. we really enjoyed it that day. at sunset, we made our way back to our home town. indeed , we all had a good time and made the most of our tour"