تسجيل الدخول

مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : are neighbours necessary??????????


mira2008
07-06-2008, 05:39 PM
:^5^:hi evry body today i m sooooo happy .:^5^:my topic this day is about neighbours

nowadays a good neighbour has been replaced by modern means of communication and entertainment. but in those days, a good neighbour means some thing completly different.
a good neighbour know every thing about you and like you sooo much too ,. he never let you down . when you are in trouble, he come to rescue you .if one of the family was sick in the night , he set up until the doctor come . sometimes, he send for the doctor himself that's agood thing.For me too, i love every body and my neighbours because they are my second family. I'm soooooooooooooo happy for this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i hope that every body love his neighbour and will love my topic too:^5^::^5^::^5^::^5^:

boodybo
07-06-2008, 06:30 PM
:^5^:hi evry body today i m sooooo happy .:^5^:my topic this day is about neighbours

nowadays a good neighbour has been replaced by modern means of communication and entertainment. but in those days, a good neighbour means some thing completly different.
a good neighbour know every thing about you and like you sooo much too ,. he never let you down . when you are in trouble, he come to rescue you .if one of the family was sick in the night , he set up until the doctor come . sometimes, he send for the doctor himself that's agood thing.For me too, i love every body and my neighbours because they are my second family. I'm soooooooooooooo happy for this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i hope that every body love his neighbour and will love my topic too:^5^::^5^::^5^::^5^:




بداية موضوعك رائع وأحييكي لأنك لم تكتبي أو تنسخي الموضوع من أي مكان ولكنه نابع منك
ثانيا أحب ان اضيف بعض الملاحظات وهي أنك يا اختي العزيزة تكتبين وكانك تتكلمين بمعنى انك لا تأخذي بالك من الازمنة او بداية الجمل ونهايتها
لا تقلقي فأنا أيضا كنت مثلك تماما وكنت أتكلم عن أي موضوع بصيغة الماضي وأصعبها على نفسي مع أني اقدر اتكلم على الموضوع بصيغة المضارع بطريقة أسهل
وانت بتتكلمي المفروض كانك بتتكلمي عربي مثلا بتقولي
لما بتكون مريض جارك بيأتي ويذهب ليحضر لك الدكتور ويسهر بجانبك الخ
لو لاحظتي بتلاقي انك بتتكلمي بصيغة المضارع وليس الماضي وراح تلاقيها اسهل بكتير في الكتابة والكلام بحيث ان الي قدامك يفهمك


تقبلي مروري وصدقيني موضوعك روعة ومنتظر منك مواضيع أكثر وأكثر :^5^:

شذى الوادي
07-06-2008, 07:03 PM
my best friend mira your topic is great and you wrote about something very important in our societiy ,
I just want to tell you that you have to but (s)after the verb like this (he comes , he sends ) I am sure that you know this rule but I love to remind you


with all love to the best friend

mira2008
07-07-2008, 12:18 AM
thanks evry body im soo happy for ur help