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[MOREOFER]

السلام عليكم
ممكن للمختصين تصحيح الأخطاء اللغوية في الرسالة التالية :

In fact, for healthy reasons , I was unable to perform the accounting's exam as required because, I was suffering from fever during the exam . Therefore, I lost focus and had a negative effect in the exam.So, I am looking for your approval of re-exam to be able to pass in .

[English Forever]

مراحب,, أخوي أتوقع انو صح عليك بس في آخر جملة أكتب pass it مو in

بعدين math exam مو accounting's و

بالتوفيق..

[boodybo]

In fact, for healthy reasons , I was unable to perform the accounting exam as required because, I was suffering from fever during the exam . Therefore, I lost focus and it had a negative effect on me at the exam.So, I am looking forward to your approval of getting a re-exam so as to be able to pass it .

اعتقد ان شاء الله دي اصح حاجة واتمنى الي عنده راي تاني يكتبه

[MOREOFER]

Thanks too much for you : English Forever and boodybo:)