الفوهرر511
02-18-2009, 02:12 AM
Could someone correct the mistakes in this paragraph
this is necessary to me
The paragraph
Leving below my means
Because I live within my means, when I read this sentences "A job loss or serious illness could wipe you out in a few weeks". I knew how I living by bad financial. Therefore, I should change my financial. This mean I have to make a short-term and a long-term goal. My short-term goal is to start living below my means. In addition, my long-term goals is to build own house.
To achieve my goals, First I`ve started sticking to a monthly budget, I think it`ll be easy to decided what things that should I spend for. Moreover, to avoid spend money on things these are not necessary. Second, I`ll cut way back on my spending. Third I`ll cancel my second cell phone (MTN). Still on Yemenmopile line. Next, I`ll try to put something away into saving, to saved enough money for something emergency. Then spend as little on a qat as I can, and more than this, I`ll try to chew qat 3 times a week. To build my own house, after 2 years, I`ll have put away enough cash for a down payment.
I`ll have enough money money when I really need it. Moreover, In 2012, I hope to have built my house.
this is necessary to me
The paragraph
Leving below my means
Because I live within my means, when I read this sentences "A job loss or serious illness could wipe you out in a few weeks". I knew how I living by bad financial. Therefore, I should change my financial. This mean I have to make a short-term and a long-term goal. My short-term goal is to start living below my means. In addition, my long-term goals is to build own house.
To achieve my goals, First I`ve started sticking to a monthly budget, I think it`ll be easy to decided what things that should I spend for. Moreover, to avoid spend money on things these are not necessary. Second, I`ll cut way back on my spending. Third I`ll cancel my second cell phone (MTN). Still on Yemenmopile line. Next, I`ll try to put something away into saving, to saved enough money for something emergency. Then spend as little on a qat as I can, and more than this, I`ll try to chew qat 3 times a week. To build my own house, after 2 years, I`ll have put away enough cash for a down payment.
I`ll have enough money money when I really need it. Moreover, In 2012, I hope to have built my house.